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Re: Nightsong
Is this your first story? Cos dang!!! Why are you killing a baby? Why is it described so much on killing it? My lil sis was reading this and she ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Flyboy: Immortal
“Daddy, why do you have to go?” The child used his gloved hand to wipe his runny nose. Frosty air brushed against him, leaving specks of snow on his winter ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Regen: Chapter 0.5
Good story but not my kind of story. 1. Too much description. If you have less, you will stand more of a chance of gripping the reader to your story ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Drakonia Online: Logon
Dynamo, This was quite a good piece of work you done. It was slow at first but eventually it moved on and became quite a fun read! :D What is ...
Aug 6, 2008